Protected: Judgment Park Part 4

Protected: Judgment Park Part 4

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  • Name

    This is a great story, but the last line of this part is kind of…more dramatic that necessarily i think. And i had a hard time believing Michelle is pregnant only three days after her and John have sex. The entire story though is amazing overall, and i feel bad mentioning these two things…this is a great concept. Terribly tragic.

    • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

      Thanks for your feedback I appreciate it ! Don’t feel bad I like hearing criticism

  • carina

    I love this story ! Caint wait for part 4 ;)))) muahhh

    • Trey Vines

      Part 4 is already out !

  • Danielle Tipton-Marshall

    Wow ok I just heard of Judgment Park today made an account and read all the parts so far. Please tell me when you are done you are gonna get this published because I would love to own it. I may print it out if thats ok with you?

    • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

      I’m working on making this into an ebook , and once all the parts are completed I’ll post the ebook on amazon or apple store for free for anyone to download it , but yea feel free to print it

      • Danielle Tipton-Marshall

        Thank you its amazing. Cant wait for you to put part 5 up! Will be checking all day today!

  • christina

    This is such a good story. Very brutal but still good. I can’t wait for it to be completely finish although i hope it never does. And when it goes out im so gonna download it. You should put the other parts on wattpad

  • Kyle Gallacher

    Amazing doesn’t even cut it, If there was an ebook of this available or even a short story paperback i would 100% buy it without a second though, brutal yes, but it shows how much stuff can keep you interested when it wouldn’t be in a normal book. Hopefully you make this a long and eventful read, considering soo much can be done with the storyline including twists and turns it could actually be made into Paragraphs instead of Parts.. and resemble a full book. keep up the good work! Can’t wait for next part

  • cesaphan

    I was immediately captured from the first paragraph of this story. GREAT GREAT work.

  • Kellye

    I am so ready for part 5. Parts 1-4 had me on edge. you have a creative mind. in the mean time while i wait for part 5 to come out what do you recommend?

    • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

      Watch Game of thrones or Attack on titans !

      • Kellye

        Your mind is so fascinating. How do you come up with your stories?

        • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

          Honestly i just let my mind wonder and think of situations that no one would be able to survive or participate in

          • Kellye

            I can’t find part 5. Is it out already?

          • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

            Not yet

          • Kellye

            Yeaa I saw you put it comes out the 25th. Lol I have it marked in my calendar

  • Danielle Tipton-Marshall

    Nevermind I just seen the part that says the 25th! Lol

  • Frankie Lymon Arms

    Please

  • Frankie Angeloni-Simpson

    is part 5 on yet? x

  • MrzBoBo <Ow Name

    WHere did you get this story from its really good and if your making it up you have a good imagination hope its not based on a real story… I enjoy it

    • http://landofthereal.com/ Trey Vines

      Thanks and yea it was from my imagination

      • MrzBoBo <Ow Name

        np :) u got a gd imagination