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This is a great story, but the last line of this part is kind of…more dramatic that necessarily i think. And i had a hard time believing Michelle is pregnant only three days after her and John have sex. The entire story though is amazing overall, and i feel bad mentioning these two things…this is a great concept. Terribly tragic.
Thanks for your feedback I appreciate it ! Don’t feel bad I like hearing criticism
I love this story ! Caint wait for part 4 ;)))) muahhh
Part 4 is already out !
Wow ok I just heard of Judgment Park today made an account and read all the parts so far. Please tell me when you are done you are gonna get this published because I would love to own it. I may print it out if thats ok with you?
I’m working on making this into an ebook , and once all the parts are completed I’ll post the ebook on amazon or apple store for free for anyone to download it , but yea feel free to print it
Thank you its amazing. Cant wait for you to put part 5 up! Will be checking all day today!
This is such a good story. Very brutal but still good. I can’t wait for it to be completely finish although i hope it never does. And when it goes out im so gonna download it. You should put the other parts on wattpad
Amazing doesn’t even cut it, If there was an ebook of this available or even a short story paperback i would 100% buy it without a second though, brutal yes, but it shows how much stuff can keep you interested when it wouldn’t be in a normal book. Hopefully you make this a long and eventful read, considering soo much can be done with the storyline including twists and turns it could actually be made into Paragraphs instead of Parts.. and resemble a full book. keep up the good work! Can’t wait for next part
I was immediately captured from the first paragraph of this story. GREAT GREAT work.
I am so ready for part 5. Parts 1-4 had me on edge. you have a creative mind. in the mean time while i wait for part 5 to come out what do you recommend?
Watch Game of thrones or Attack on titans !
Your mind is so fascinating. How do you come up with your stories?
Honestly i just let my mind wonder and think of situations that no one would be able to survive or participate in
I can’t find part 5. Is it out already?
Yeaa I saw you put it comes out the 25th. Lol I have it marked in my calendar
Nevermind I just seen the part that says the 25th! Lol
is part 5 on yet? x
WHere did you get this story from its really good and if your making it up you have a good imagination hope its not based on a real story… I enjoy it
Thanks and yea it was from my imagination
np u got a gd imagination